You have made appropriate decisions regarding genre and the contents of your magazines, however, it still lacks potential ideas and needs more explanation. To improve, discuss your decisions in more detail and show more proof of research and knowledge about real magazines. Review the reasons behind your decisions. Correct all spelling/grammatical errors, keeping a professional tone in report writing. Remember, more tasks need to be completed to totally satisfy this learning aim.
You have made appropriate decisions regarding genre and the contents of your magazines, however, it still lacks potential ideas and needs more explanation. To improve, discuss your decisions in more detail and show more proof of research and knowledge about real magazines. Review the reasons behind your decisions. Correct all spelling/grammatical errors, keeping a professional tone in report writing. Remember, more tasks need to be completed to totally satisfy this learning aim.
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